except not even close
a madlib echo of my life
structure the same
all the players, places
a grab bag collection
and then she asks
"would you take it back?"
like it's an option
like years didn't pass
crawling and rushing
only turn back one page
and rewrite it
revisionist mystery
whodunnit I already solved
no takebacks
Friday, May 21, 2010
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You speak the truth! No going back. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment and welcome to my little poetic corner of the world.
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